@Reis Zeitoune Your SL not Catchy, you've given value before you offer them something that's good, the email is overall good, but make it shorter, smoother and let it flow , run it through Chatgpt. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-W9luaFcL-SrTzdgEMMYG6R-VUZidaM0hP9cuPiNnLc/edit?usp=drivesdk Check this out. Maybe you can see something I missed.
Dont get me wrong, but im kinda tired of reviewing beginner's copies so only submit your copies if you've been doing it for a while and now write better than average copies. Beginners, do not submit your copies here.