give me feedback for my email copy project this is for fitness coaches

Subject: You don’t need more content to get clients

Hi Sarah,

Tired of posting every day on social media — but still not getting clients?

Here’s the reason: your dream clients aren't scrolling… they’re just not seeing you in their inbox.

Instead of posting more, try this:

Build a simple email list of your dream clients — and start reaching out directly.

No algorithm. No guesswork. Just real conversations.

If you’d like, I can share a short email script that’s helping other coaches book more calls — without spending hours online.

Just reply with “send it”, and I’ll send it your way.

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