Your proposal is talking about you, not about the client’s problem.
Clients don’t care about your full background — they care how fast you understand their need.
How to Fix It:
✅ Start your proposal with their problem, not your introduction.
Example:
❌ “Hi, I am an expert with 5 years of experience…”
✅ “I noticed you need someone to manage daily tasks and improve workflow efficiency…”
✅ Give a 1-sentence mini-solution to show you understand the project.
✅ Keep it short, clean, and easy to read.
✅ End with a question — it increases reply chances.
🧠 Pro Tip: Proposals that focus on the client get 3x more responses.