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Modern Romeo and Juliet
I’m wrapped as a subway around its tracks
No idea where I’m headed
Swollen heart, Juliet can you calm down
It’s not about being brave, it’s not about the
Possible romance you can save
Not when he won’t even share his location
Your angel wings, bloodied by his karma
Are you ready to give all that up for a man
Who won’t even include you in his love story live stream,
His puritanical invocation
Go with Paris, go be rich
Just pick up the ointment first,
That smile causes an unruly itch
Copyright ©️ Kimberly Virga 2026
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Modern Romeo and Juliet
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