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Hi, everyone. I've been working on script called "THE FLOOR IS LAVA" it is a spoof on some volcano/distaster films. I wanted to get your input on this. I'm open to whatever you say. I've been booed off stage numerous times so I can handle it.

@Ellie Shoja

@David Zucker

Let me set this up so you know what's going one. We are almost to ACT 2 on this. Antagonists Bob is a wealthy hotel manager that has hedgefunds invested in this oasis he hired Protaganist Hank to drill on the island and find oil. Earlier they did find oil and were successful. The island has an active volcano and just erupted. The lava is coming in the direction of the hotel, the LAVA is the engine. The goal is to get to safety. Hank recently found out that his men that worked under him drilling oil all died from the lava. At the hotel lobby BOB AND HANK argue. Take it from here. (sidenote I have dyslexia so if you see a sentence incomplete or grammar incorrect that's why) READ THIS STRAIGHT no JERRY LEWIS. PLEASE POINT OUT ANY FLAWS

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