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UR BOOK / SCREENPLAY INFO (Quickfire Recap)
SETTING
Rural Missouri, 2012
Trailer park in Seligman, MO
Local tavern in Washburn, MO
CORE PLOT
A celestial baby girl is born in Heaven — first in a million years.
She’s magically cloaked as a human baby boy named Leo to hide her identity.
For the first year, a baby’s magic cannot be tracked — a forgotten ancient loophole.
Baby is left on a trailer porch with a note: “Leo.”
Found by two humans: Danny (drunk) and Liza (overworked barback).-
PARENT of Baby
Dad = godson of Hades
Mom = goddaughter of Athena
Baby inherits wildly potent mixed magic.
MAIN THREATS
These demons are hunting “Leo”:
Sons of Medusa
Beelzebub & his sons
Lilith
Barbatos
Belthazar
They can look human but always feel… “off.”
MAGIC SYSTEM
All magical beings emit unique energy signatures. Under 18 the singal is strongest.
One special type of demon can sense this energy AND steal magic.
Heaven + Hell share a second ancient legal language.
Demons have their own fluent language: ScreamSpeech.SCREAMSPEECH
Full demonic tongue.
Harsh, raw, inhuman.
Leo eventually learns to mimic it.
MUST be used in every act.
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THE SHADOWRINTH
The demonic stronghold.
Living maze of shadows and stone.
Contains the Obsidian Throne.
Houses the ScreamSpeech Archives.
No demon leaves unchanged. Many don’t leave at all.
BIG STORY MOMENTS
Leo accidentally triggers a Rapture-like event:
Bodies rise from the ground during a meltdown — this is one of your standout symbolic scenes.
Leo has one major impactful moment per act.
Leo triggers main events in realy world . We can find some crazy things and plant them in .
Like leos cry creates a hurricane.
TECH IN YOUR WORLD
Full humanoid robots exist, including J4-K1L (“Jackal”).
HALF angel half Bot.
If you want, I can also:
Break this into chapter outlines
Build character sheets
Make maps, lore charts, or power system diagrams
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