Sharing a critical breakdown of a recent post from Kerry More, which you can read in full here:
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Key Takeaways & Suggestions for Optimization
- Clarify the Core Message: Anchor the intro with why using AI as a “mirror” leads to deep growth—not just efficiency.
- Be Concise: Avoid repeating phrases and compress ideas for clarity and punch.
- Show, Don’t Just Tell: Include a concrete example or brief story showing how the “mirror” process produces real insight.
- Step-by-Step Guidance: Lay out the meeting audit ritual as clear, numbered steps so anyone can try it.
- Explain the “Mirror” Concept: Spend a line explaining what “using AI as a mirror” actually looks like in practice.
- Drive Engagement: End with a question or prompt for readers to share their own results with this approach.
- Visual Support: Where possible, add a process visualization or diagram for increased accessibility.
Direct, actionable revision:
- Open with the impact of the “mirror” approach.
- Insert a real-life or hypothetical story as illustration.
- Bullet out or number each step in the process.
- Mention what to avoid (e.g., automation without reflection).
- Conclude with a challenge: “Try this, and share your surprising findings below.”
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