THANK YOU for the Goose Boost! [UPDATE] · GOOSIFY: Skool Made Fun

THANK YOU for the Goose Boost! [UPDATE]

Last week I was gifted by Goose and the community with an hour of support about my Skool community offer and positioning copy. [Link to replay is here]

The model I'm replicating is Jamie Heinrich's AI Filmmaking. Thumbnail attached.

My core offer line was previously:

"Buzztown: Where screenwriters stop waiting & start making their movies"

Goose suggested "Buzztown" was adding significant friction. Which was a great call, so I removed it.

And he also suggested 2 offer ideas with sharper outcomes:

"make 5K/month making 1 minute movies"

"advance your career making 1 minute movies"

Those were very instructive for me.

So I played around with all of this, updated the thumbnail, and the next thing I'll test is:

"Hey Screenwriter - Get noticed by turning your script into a movie clip"

I wanted to call out the avatar more directly. Plus, screenwriters have deep emotional connection to their scripts (they spend 100+ hours on those puppies) so "your script" may strike a nerve. And I think "get noticed" is a little more clear and primal than "advance your career."

And here's the About Page copy:

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GET YOUR STORY SEEN

Most scripts die on laptops.

But you can make a 1 minute movie from it and make things happen for your career.

REAL EXAMPLES

🎬 Jono Matt (Brooks' colleague) created a concept trailer - got Channing Tatum attached to his project before the screenplay was even written.

🎬 Luke Barnett (Brock's colleague) posted a short film online - got 2 million views, and had dream managers and producers fighting over him.

🎬 Steve Pinder (Brooks' client) proved his storytelling ability in short-form work - got nominated for an Oscar.

Talent shows - within a minute.

WHO WE ARE

Brooks Elms is a WGA writer with 45+ scripts written, 2 features directed, and 100+ writers coached 1:1.