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Forgot I'm literally a copywriter ๐Ÿ’€ Let me roast your Skool description (therapy NOT included)
UPDATE: Ok, dudes, I've gotta cut this off... ๐Ÿคฃ It's been real, it's been fun, but I have a community to run ๐Ÿ˜ (come join me in there if it feels aligned!)
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On our last Cohort call with Goose we talked about the Descriptions for our Skool communities.
And I was reminded that yes, in fact, Iโ€™m a copywriter with 6 & 7-figure launches under my belt ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ™ˆ
So hereโ€™s an example of how we turned confusing fruit salad descriptions into clear offers โ€“ like the one that gave her first paid member ๐ŸŽ‰
BEFORE:
A community of people overcoming their emotional triggers & toxic patterns so they can lead their life full of confidence & emotional stability
AFTER:
Overcome your emotional triggers and toxic patterns so you can lead a life full of confidence and emotional stability.
Now I would love to help five of you to refine your Skool community descriptions
Post your description here and Iโ€™ll roast it ๐Ÿ‘‡ Iโ€™ll put mine in the comments for you to roast too!
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Jen Hill Myers
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Forgot I'm literally a copywriter ๐Ÿ’€ Let me roast your Skool description (therapy NOT included)