On our last Cohort call with Goose we talked about the Descriptions for our Skool communities.
And I was reminded that yes, in fact, Iโm a copywriter with 6 & 7-figure launches under my belt ๐๐
So hereโs an example of how we turned confusing fruit salad descriptions into clear offers โ like the one that gave her first paid member ๐ BEFORE:
A community of people overcoming their emotional triggers & toxic patterns so they can lead their life full of confidence & emotional stability
AFTER:
Overcome your emotional triggers and toxic patterns so you can lead a life full of confidence and emotional stability.
Now I would love to help five of you to refine your Skool community descriptions
Post your description here and Iโll roast it ๐ Iโll put mine in the comments for you to roast too!