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example of an ineffective hook or post
there's no hook at all
'simple way' doesn't pull me in
the tagline of this post is 'tag people'
so the entire post was: help ppl speak up by tagging them
why did you need a fkn paragraph to say that?
a better hook?
they only started speaking up AFTER i did this...
that's a hook. what did you do? it's a STAB of energy then suspense
and make the body of the text concise and organized this is just a mess
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example of an ineffective hook or post
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