Update 01: 2nd drawing attempts - lengthened nose, tweaked centreline 'T' and moved features below nose down. Nose might be a little too long in length but it feels better than when it was too short. Lips corner (right side) feel a little over stretched as lip shape feels altered and stretched more than it should, but more happier with this attempt than previous. Think may have gone a little too enthusiastic and over board on the rhythm lines, lesson learned for next time! 😂
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After going back to tracing lines feel have a better understanding and feel of rhythms now.
Overall apart from the nose that needs lengthening, and features after nose will move down once nose is lengthened as at present with short nose everything from nose down is too high. In addition to lengthening nose, few rhythm line angles that are slightly off and the Centreline 'T' need tweaking, but overall happy with this attempt. Tracing the rhythm lines on ref helped prompt me and kept me in check to stay away from planes for this exercise even though temptation was there. Now, just to repeat this exercise with the remainder of traced rhythm line drawing and attempt the time pose.