Hey Co-Writers—
Dropping something I've been refining that's made a measurable difference in how my AI-assisted content performs.
The problem: AI nails logical structure but completely misses emotional flow. Your content hits the points but not the feelings. No build-up, no release, no resonance.
The fix: Mapping emotional beats BEFORE writing—then directing AI to follow the map.
The Five Beats (simplified):
1. Disruption (sentences 1-3) — Break the pattern. Surprise, confession, contradiction. No information yet. Just feeling.
2. Tension (next 2-3 paragraphs) — Press on the problem. Make it uncomfortable. Don't rush to fix it.
3. Release (middle section) — Introduce your framework/solution. Only works if tension earned it.
4.Proof (one solid example) — Show it working. Story beats statistics every time.
5. Resonance (final paragraph) — Not a summary. An echo. What feeling do you want lingering?
How I prompt for this:
Instead of "write emotionally" (which produces pure cringe), I encode it directly:
``` Structure the emotional flow:
- Sentences 1-3: Disruption. No information—just pattern break.
- Paragraphs 2-3: Build tension around [pain point]. Don't resolve yet.
- Paragraphs 4-5: Release with [framework]. Relief should feel earned.
- Paragraph 6: Concrete example showing this working.
- Final paragraph: Image or thought that echoes. No summary. ```
Quick exercise:
Pull up your last piece of AI-assisted content.
Mark where each beat lands (or doesn't).
Most pieces flatline at beat 2—tension. We're all too eager to fix the problem before letting the reader feel it.
Where does YOUR content usually lose the emotional thread?
Drop your answer below—and if anyone wants, share a piece and I'll give feedback on the beat structure.
Let's workshop some examples