! Really glad you've submitted your resume for some feedback, there's lots of improvement to make some pretty big changes and get a LOT more traction from employers!
The biggest biggest factor by far: you need to quantify your achievements. Let me know what you think, if you have any questions, you're not sure how to do it, and come to our weekly group Q&A calls on Tuesdays at 1PM EST (check the Calendar Tab in the group for the link)