How could I improve my hooks?

Hey how do you guys think I can make my hooks better. I'm thinking I need to get more specific with my text just not sure exactly how I can do that without making it cringey. I try to do these motivating type hooks because I feel like my music is for people that like alt stuff and are going through tough times lol. I also do hooks related to artist that my music is similar to. Attached are some of my ig videos and hooks I've used before. Ya'll think I can continue in this direction or do I need to think of something new?

(8) Instagram (If only juice wrld and x made more rock music)

(8) Instagram (They don't understand cuz it's not their dream to understand.

(8) Instagram (I can't fall asleep nowadays cuz I be thinking too damn much over and over looking for answers that don't exist.)

(8) Instagram (It's just you vs. you homie)

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