Get to the point faster for sure. Also, some jump cuts didn't make sense. The viewer expect to see something else, but it was bringing me back towards the same frame and composition (you sitting in the middle). Also, I think when you make more use of B-roll the message itself will be more impactful. Show your "parenting", there is 1 rule: Meet the person where they are. In other words, if you are talking parenting: Show yourself being with the kids in the living room, people can resonate with that.

Taking the time to make a scene with light. It dramatically changes the way things look on camera. I think also a 30 day content challenge is very good, if you keep yourself accountable. Instead of just going through a 30 day content making run, try to be intentional with improvement per day. For example: Day 1 Reel 1 - Improve Light, Day 2 Reel 2 - Story Telling etc.

@Maryln Rene I feel your pain. I in fitness as well, and working with video editors can be painful journey. It's why I make my video's myself. According to my vision of the video. Keep crushing it.

Nothing beats the voice of Dorian Yates!