He’s playing in 11 days local what are peoples opinions is he past it?

https://vm.tiktok.com/ZNRM6L4gD/

Please post here for feedback or direct answers from me. All of it is recorded live and I'll link your feedback/answers in a comment directed to you. For Premium/VIP Members: - Post your video/audio/question in a comment on this thread. - In your comment please state what area of help you're after, the more specific the better. - All posts will be responded by me during our call - Feel free to join the live call to ask additional questions or say hi :) For Free Members: - I will only respond if there's time after Premium/VIP members feedback is finished - Post your video/audio/question in a comment on this thread. - In your comment please state what area of help you're after, the more specific the better. - I will go through posts based on user's level (highest to lowest) - You will not have access to the live call but you'll be able to watch the replay To Upgrade to Standard/VIP membership Click Here For More Info on our Standard/VIP membership Click Here

Hey everyone! Could I please have your help to do some research and improve my community? For those of you who are not on the premium plan: What would it take for you to commit? What type of training, support or something else would you need? For those who joined the premium membership, what made you say "YES this is a no brainer?" Thank you for your help 🎸

This is part of my recent 5 year road map to become a full time originals musician. There are a lot of songs ahead of me. And I needed a first. This was it. It mostly landed. But not fully. My self assessment is a 6 out of 10. Some of the words don’t land for me. The chorus lyrics needs some more syllables to match the melody. But I do like the build. And I like the hook. The chorus melody is generally strong. And many of the lyrics i like. But I won’t be able to leave my day job with this one. Still, it’s above the threshold that I’m going to play it at my gig tonight (if I can remember it). It took me about 6 hours to get the lyrics. 15 minutes for the music. Pretty much how I view my songwriting strengths and areas to work on.