[WEEKLY COPY REVIEW] Instagram Story Copy...?
👉 The Copy: We have an interesting piece of copy today. Not an email, not a headline, not a sales page. But instead, Instagram story copy. Check out the image below to see the copy 👇 Now let's review it... 👉 The Review: Ok, starting with story 1 (on the far left). Good thing: you added a sticker to disrupt the scroll (the poll). Bad thing: the poll has nothing to do with the story. It's too high friction for them to want to answer. Otherwise, the content is good. Alright, slide 2. The value is good, but you don't need a 2nd poll. Just on the first story is fine. Also, you don't want to say "Swipe" When you swipe on IG stories, it'll skip all your stories. But when you tap, it'll move to your next story. Alright, slide 3. There's a LOT of text and unnecessary fluff. I'd shorten it to just "DM me 'SCALE' and I'll send you a $100k+ scaling blueprint" Then as for the 2nd piece of text that talks about only 100 available, I'd delete that. Bro, it's a digital PDF lol. There's no physical inventory that limits it to 100. That's it! A bit of a different review this week, but it's still copywriting.