this is so fun, i love it

@Paulo Costa, The Roaster they are so much fun, I love roasty 😍

I think you've got a solid foundation. The copy is easy to follow and it's clear who you're trying to help. My biggest suggestion would be to focus a little more on the transformation. Rather than leading with what members will learn, paint a picture of where they'll be after they've been in the community for a while. People join because of the result, not the curriculum. I'd also look at turning some of the feature list into benefit statements. For example, instead of "AI tools and resources," tell people what those tools will help them achieve. Small change, but it makes the value feel much stronger.

@Alice Nj glad i could help, even just a little 😁

I really like the branding and the problem you're solving comes across clearly. If I could offer one suggestion, I'd tighten up the About section a bit. It feels like there's enough content for a full sales page, so some of the key points get repeated. I'd focus on the transformation first, then briefly explain the workflow. With only 1,000 characters to work with, making every sentence earn its place would probably have an even bigger impact. Overall though, it looks really professional.

@Paulo Costa, The Roaster found it, it was this one

@Paulo Costa, The Roaster I think there was another post that I commented on

The design looks polished and professional, but the page still feels a bit feature-heavy rather than transformation-focused. I understand what I'll get, but I'm not completely convinced why I need it yet. I'd spend more time talking about the challenges Skool owners are facing, what life looks like before joining, and what changes after joining. The hero image also feels more like AI consulting than community building, so there may be an opportunity to align the visuals more closely with the actual promise. I'd also add more personality and founder story. Why did you create this? What problem were you trying to solve? That's often what helps people connect with a new community. Finally, with only a few members, I'd lean harder into the founding member angle and make joining early feel like an advantage rather than focusing on what the community will become later. My biggest observation wasn't actually the headline. It was that after reading the page I knew: - What's inside - Who it's for But I wasn't feeling: - Why this community instead of another AI community? - Why this founder? - Why now? That's usually where the strongest About pages win. They create belief, not just understanding. Humans rarely join communities because of the curriculum. They join because they trust the person, relate to the problem, and want the outcome. The page explains the curriculum well. It could sell the transformation much harder.

@Laura Paulina let us know how you go 😀