Joshua Palassis

LINK TO POST ON X #6. X Account Audit - @askjeremyjones 𝐂𝐨𝐯𝐞𝐫 𝐏𝐡𝐨𝐭𝐨: ✅ CLEAN and easy to read - looks good on mobile too even with the dumb X crop lol ❓ I have zero clarity about what you do from the cover but it does create enough intrigue to read further so... it's not so much a criticism as a thought. Maybe you could add 1 line of clarity IN the cover: e.g. "Pathway to your Ideas in Print" 𝐏𝐫𝐨𝐟𝐢𝐥𝐞 𝐏𝐡𝐨𝐭𝐨: ✅ Clean, quality, and looks great ❌ Not exactly "complementary" to your cover... the background colour could have more contrast so that YOU pop vs. blending into the earth tones + your profile pic would stand out against the cover more 𝐍𝐚𝐦𝐞: ✅ Glad you're verified ✅ Your name is easy to read and remember and your username is great as well 𝐁𝐢𝐨: ✅ Overall it's a decent bio for clarity and authority 😂 Your "location" is funny - just caught that ❌ Who's "you?" anyone? no ICP? ❌ Your Book Blueprint™ is vague and doesn't really add anything to your authority or clarity ❌ the AI book funnel, is that for YOU or something I can download? Maybe clarify a little? ❓ Maybe your funnel is killing it - not sure - but unless I've had a conversation with you, I think your funnel page is missing proof, personality and pezaz lol 👉 Sample: Helping Experts Turn What They Know Into A Book 📚That Builds Authority + Leadflow | 250+ Clients Published | Download my $32K AI-Powered Book Funnel ↓ 𝐏𝐨𝐬𝐭𝐬: ✅ You have a VERY clear lane around turning expertise into books, authority, trust, and ultimately clients. I immediately understand what you want to be known for. ✅ Your strongest content is when you get specific. The 100-page client example, $50 in ads → $11K, Book → Resource → Workshop → Offer, the launch prompt kit, etc. Those posts actually SHOW your method instead of just talking about books generally. ✅ I like the visual/thread direction too. The “Before / After” graphic makes the idea much easier to understand and gives the feed some needed variety.

Jeremy Jones

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Value Adds 🔥

Let's connect on X

I am back on X after only being mostly active on LinkedIn for a few years. I will be on there daily to comment and reshare posts Who else want to connect to reshare each other's posts to help grow on X?

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Joshua Palassis

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You already got me 😎✅

Joshua Palassis

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@Jeremy Jones

Joshua Palassis

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General ✅

Proper IG Audit - Rosa Hart & Melissa Nicole

Hey friends, something I'm willing to do for members on the Premium + VIP tiers is a custom social media audit. You can check @Melissa Nicole 's recent post where I did one for her LinkedIn & recorded my feedback, and you can check these action PDFs I gave @Rosa Hart after we did our audit live on Google Meet. I'm ALSO running X Audits as you may have seen from previous posts. So... that being said... I want this community to be ACTIONABLE, not just comfortable. Let's LOOK the part so we can GET the parts and thrive together, my friends. 😎

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Proper IG Audit - Rosa Hart & Melissa Nicole

Joshua Palassis

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@Melissa Nicole 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 it makes it fun when you're SO easy to work with lol

Melissa Nicole

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Content Review / Profile Audit

Okay Josh... Round 2 😂 of Audits!

Apparently I need to take my own advice and suck it up, buttercup. 🌼😂 Because closed mouths don't get fed... need to ask THE Connector (@Joshua Palassis ) I’ve recently started taking LinkedIn more seriously, so I’d love for you to audit what I currently have and tell me what you see. - What’s working? - What am I missing? - What could be clearer? - And if you see a direction or opportunity that I’m not seeing yet, I’m open to that too. I also have a Project Choose Love company page, and I’d love your thoughts on how I could actually utilize that alongside my personal page instead of just having it exist. 😂 Here you go.... Personal: https://www.linkedin.com/in/melissanicole/ Company/Business Page: https://www.linkedin.com/company/project-choose-love/ Do your worst. 😂🫣

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Joshua Palassis

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@Melissa Nicole

Joshua Palassis

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@Melissa Nicole LOLL I mean... you could

Melissa Nicole

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Content Review / Profile Audit

Suck It Up, Buttercup & get your AUDIT from Josh!!

Okay, hear me out. 😂 I asked @Joshua Palassis to audit my X profile. Is it slightly uncomfortable asking someone to look at something you’ve spent a lot of time building and basically say, “Tell me what I’m missing”? YUP!!! Do it anyway. Because feedback is DATA. Josh pointed out what’s already working, but he also gave me some really tangible things to work on: - Tightening my bio and CTA - Making my philosophy more visual, sharing more of me - -Pulling my content back through my specific lens when it starts getting too broad. And that’s exaaaaaaaaaaactly what I needed. I’m sharing some of his audit here because if we’re serious about growing, we have to be willing to let someone else look at what we may be too close to see. Now I get to make some changes, test them, and eventually come back for round two. 😂 So... suck it up, buttercup. 🌼 Ask Josh for the audit!!!! I'm not which tier it's included it... but doooooo it! And Josh, thank you. You really do have an incredible eye for this stuff. 🙌

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